Thank You very much for reading and feedback! Yes I think that many people felt like that at least once.

Thank You very much for this feedback! Yes I definitely has problems with presenting emotions credibly.

Thank You very much for reading! Were there some things You disliked?

As I wrote, story is OK. Not great, but it has some dark fantasy elements I like.

I had this feeling with two first books too.

Thank You very much! I hope You will like it at least a bit.

The first one I noticed is in the first paragraph. I’m unsure if it’s a mistake or an obscure word, but when googling the word “pacrossct” I got no related results.

Oh, it is obvious mistake, there should be just “pact”. I remember correcting it, but it looks like it was not saved or something. I corrected it once again and looks like this time it sticked. Thank you very much for bringing this to my attention.

Thank You very much! Can You write something more about “odd choice of words”? I am not native English Speaker and I am willing to improve my language.

Thank You very much! Hope You will like it at least a bit.

I am reading “Dread Wyrm”, third book in the Traitor Son Cycle by Miles Cameron. Plot and world are OK, but I have feeling they are written in clumsy style.