Poetry@lemmy.world · 2 months ago

[OC] Decay of the alcoholic

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Poetry@lemmy.world · 2 months ago

I don’t have enough to give

For I give much to myselfs

Such wealth ward wisdom

Abysmal I be by moments

Monumentous failur’ here

Beer- all I can take’th now

How smarts I am in morn

Warn you, I am, of what u

Could be if fail to choose

What life is in ideal ways

Decay clearly as rainy day

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